presentation crit

1) i thought we should show our confidence for the client, when you are pitching, it is very important thing is you should look more professional,but our flash for presentation did not work very well, we were all nervous during the flashing time.

2)i thought we showed too much your understanding, it is a different presentation, our taget audience is client, need more commuincation, we need be careful of the way we translate the information, don't just fill in the stuff, reflash others is more important.

3)forcus on buliding arguement step by step,don't be thread.i thought the content should focus on client's request, we should come up the benifits clearly.

4)for technical things, the PHP parts are more likely relatived the client's request, but less in the CMS part. for me, i did not do enough reasech for back up thing.