presentation crit

1) i thought we should show our confidence for the client, when you are pitching, it is very important thing is you should look more professional,but our flash for presentation did not work very well, we were all nervous during the flashing time.

2)i thought we showed too much your understanding, it is a different presentation, our taget audience is client, need more commuincation, we need be careful of the way we translate the information, don't just fill in the stuff, reflash others is more important.

3)forcus on buliding arguement step by step,don't be thread.i thought the content should focus on client's request, we should come up the benifits clearly.

4)for technical things, the PHP parts are more likely relatived the client's request, but less in the CMS part. for me, i did not do enough reasech for back up thing.

Prepared the presentation

finished my flash section and the script for presentation,
The whole thing will be finished by tomorrow, I feel regret because you will not very satisfied when you learned more. I found I have not mentioned the reasrching engine in the book, also I thought I should do more about comparison the hosting and own the server. This parts I thought might not very clearly for the client. I’m really wanted to revise the book again, but this is not good for presentation; I should look more professional for my job.

sum up for week (06.Mar-21.Mar)

During this week, I revised the technical integration chart and give some revised technical cost for finical person. Closed the technical part and finished the technical report. The rest of thing for next week is preparing the presentation. It seems everything is nearly done and relaxing time will come. But I still think the time is not enough for my research.